I'm Mikaella and sometimes I have something to say. Hear me.
Tuesday, April 6, 2010
Stargazer
The stars shining Cool cool air Sweet smell Chilling breeze The black darkness of sky The white lightness of stars Glory Beauty World spinning Slowly, oh slowly And perfect.
so again I will tell you that this is good, and I wish I could write the frill and the fluff, but nonetheless I like to write the facts therefore any poems that I would write would more than likely be rather horrible.
I've never been any good at poetry but you've always seemed to have a knack for it. Your poem reminded me of a piece of dark, cold hard candy. That tastes like blue raspberry. Don't ask why. It just came to mind. haha. Hope that doesn't sound as weird to you as it does to me.
I really like this,
ReplyDeleteIt's very stark but pretty
and It paints a scene well,
I like the contrast between lightness and Dark
GOOD JOB!
so again I will tell you that this is good, and I wish I could write the frill and the fluff, but nonetheless I like to write the facts therefore any poems that I would write would more than likely be rather horrible.
ReplyDeleteI've never been any good at poetry but you've always seemed to have a knack for it. Your poem reminded me of a piece of dark, cold hard candy. That tastes like blue raspberry. Don't ask why. It just came to mind. haha. Hope that doesn't sound as weird to you as it does to me.
ReplyDeleteYou are a brilliant poet. Nuff said.
ReplyDeleteIt seems to flow very well. I liked the dark in the sky but the stars and everything. You have talent.
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